[ Posted by mayshing on Dec 31st, 2006 7:23 PM ]...

thanks for taking the time to approach me first to comment.

I am actually not doing much on Comicspace right now, I am waiting until the whole site is done, other wise I would be surfing around here and comment more.

I feel bad for saying my honest opinion after you have given me such high praise for my work, but I will keep it honest to my comment, may it serve you well.

For Samurai Perfect:
Honestly speaking I have seen this kind of starting point around a few hundred times by now, so it doesn't impress me. (Not that I always have a perfect start for my story either...)

Since it's only a start, you have a lot of room to develop and still make the story interesting. I will check back on that. Definitately plan more for your begining in your next project, begining sells the work, and with so much competition today, people have short attention span and patience for you.
You need to grasp their interest immediately, but action and blood is not always the solution, (especially if everyone else uses it...) you need to sell a concept immediately as well... and not just how strong is the character... or how mystic he can be, but how will he relate to the audience.

So far for the art execution, you are using colors in a very iconic way, grass is green, night is black and purple, colors are very flat, you need to study more of how colors actually changes in different lighting to do a strong color comic/manga. I would suggest you do that.

[ Posted by fallingstar on Dec 30th, 2006 7:55 PM ]...

Hihi! :D Nice to meet you!

[ Posted by Zenithlea on Dec 18th, 2006 12:30 AM ]...

Thanks for the add. ^_^ Nice work so far. Your current page really sent chills down my spine. (Really conveyed the atmosphere very nicely.)

[ Posted by DwightLMacPherson on Dec 16th, 2006 4:25 PM ]...

Thank you for the comment, my good man! *tips hat*
It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance.
Glad to see you're down with the Poo. ^_^

D

[ Posted by ScottDMSimmons on Dec 16th, 2006 6:42 AM ]...

Hi Tim!

Glad you got the e-mail! Happy to see you here, and NICE choice for an avatar! Wayne is here, and hopefully some other of my former students will show. Can't wait to see what you come up with here, and I hope all is well with you!

Scott